IELTS TASK 1 WRITING: THE BIG PICTURE – ONLY MAGNITUDES

Today we will look at an example where the teachers who tell students to look for the key features by looking only for what is big and small are actually correct. HOWEVER, it is very, very important to understand that this is not always the case, as we saw in the dramatic examples of the past 2 days.

This bar chart represents the water use given in percentage in a number of different regions in 1995.
Water use08a

THE BIG PICTURE
The horizontal axis just has a list of regions, which does not allow us to identify a trend. However, there is more than one way to group this data, for example, we could look for a big gap between Agricultural water use and Industrial water use (Africa, Asia, Latin America) and those regions where there is a small gap (North America and Europe). We can also do it just by looking for the regions where Agricultural use is high and those where Industrial use is high. It makes no difference which way we do it.

AGRICULTURAL WATER USE HIGHEST
Africa
Asia
Latin America

These regions also had a very low use of water for industrial and domestic purposes

INDUSTRIAL WATER USE HIGHEST
North America
Europe

In these regions domestic water use accounted for the lowest level of consumption with Agricultural use a little lower than industrial use . In fact, it was about 15% lower in North America and 33% lower in Europe, in relative terms. We will look at how to calculate these figures later as we have mentioned “relative terms” many times over the last month.

One way to write the big picture view might be:

“Overall, Agriculture accounted for the highest amount of water use in Africa, Asia and Latin America while use of water for Domestic and industrial purposes in these regions was very low. In addition, the data shows that Industrial use of water was highest in North America and Europe with the proportion of water used for Agriculture a little lower and Domestic use very low in both countries.”

IN SHORT

When you look at this bar chart, it almost looks like there are trends shown BUT when you look carefully, you realise that no trends can be identified here and you must find another way to group the data. (If this chart is drawn to show the regions in order of their use of water for Agriculture, it is very easy to get trapped and think there is a trend).

Water use08

After trends, we always look to see if we can describe differences in MAGNITUDE and in this example, that is exactly what we do.

Notice that we DO NOT USE NUMBERS in the big picture statement. We do not want to confuse the reader and make them think we are giving details for the graph, so we avoid using numbers BUT in these magnitude questions, this can lead to language that is not entirely precise e.g. “a little lower”. Nevertheless, we will solve this issue in the details section by giving very precise information about the magnitudes we are describing.

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(Data source: http://www.fao.org/docrep/005/y3918e/y3918e03.htm )

IELTS TASK 1 WRITING: THE BIG PICTURE

Here is another example where candidates can easily make errors although this one is presented in a way that the situation should be fairly clear.

This graph shows the distance covered in millions of passenger kilometres in one city in China.
transport01

MAGNITUDES
It is quite difficult in this question to say too much about the magnitudes because most of them are changing all the time. It would be possible to average the values and make some general comment but this is perhaps more of a detail than a key feature EXCEPT for the position of walking as a means of transport. Very clearly, walking did not account for a high number of kilometres and it is the smallest by comparison to all other modes of transport and, finally, the distance covered by this method has not changed significantly over the period.

TRENDS
A large number of bars are given here, representing 6 different years. Hopefully, you can see that even though there is some irregularity present in all modes of transport, except for the train, the trends are still very clear.

Sometimes candidates concentrate too much on details and will talk about the increase in bus or bicycle travel between 1990 and 1995 BUT these points, while true, are an extremely minor detail in the use of each of these methods of travel.

The most important feature here is the very clear trends that are shown and not every little variation in the heights of the bars. The data shows very clear general trends in the distances traveled by each mode of transport.

THE BIG PICTURE
One way to present the big picture view might be:

“Overall, the distance covered by train and car increased significantly over the period shown while that covered by bus and bicycle saw a large decline. In addition, the distance covered by walking remained fairly steady in comparison.”

When you look at the bar charts for bus, car and bicycle travel don’t get tricked into concentrating on the individual bars. Look for the BIG PICTURE. A lot of candidates would say that bicycle use fluctuated BUT this is NOT CORRECT. Although the distances covered by bicycle were a little erratic, there was a very clear downward trend and THAT IS THE BIG PICTURE.

NOTE: THE USE OF THE WORD “POPULARITY”
Many candidates would use the word “popularity” in responding to this task HOWEVER a careful analysis shows that we don’t know how popular these modes of transport are with people in the city. Look at walking as an example. According to the graph, around 8 million kilometres are walked every year by people in this city. This could happen if very large numbers of people are walking short distances OR if a much smaller number of people are walking quite big distances. There is nothing in the data that tells us how many people walk, consequently, the POPULARITY of these modes of transport is unknown. In short, we really should avoid using this language if we want to be very precise in the response.

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IELTS TASK 1: MATHS QUESTION TYPES

Let us take a break from comparison questions today because we have done quite a bit over the past week.

One issue that troubles many candidates who take classes is that often the teacher doesn’t cover all the different types of maths question: bar charts, line graphs, tables and pie charts. In our classes we do manage to cover all these types and additional issues with maths questions but the truth is, most of the times, candidates don’t have to worry. None of these different types create any special sort of problem: no matter how the data is presented you are basically looking for two things – TRENDS and MAGNITUDE differences.  As we have seen, sometimes only the trends matter, sometimes only the magnitudes matter and OFTEN BOTH matter.

But the way the data is presented usually makes no difference. Let us look at an example of this.

BAR CHART
Here is a bar chart which presents information comparing the percentage of household spending in a number of different areas:

spending_bar

TABLE
But look at this data:

Item ……………………1955….1985….2015
housing ……………….33 ……..18 ……14
electricity & water ….18 ……..21 ……28
Food …………………..15 ……..18 ……10
education …………….20 ……..24 ……30
holidays ………………..8 ……..11 …….8
entertainment ………..6 ……….8 …….10

As we will see in a minute, the same information is contained here.

PIE CHART
and finally look at this data:

spending_pie1

spending_pie2

spending_pie3

These pie charts again contain exactly the same information as the table and the bar chart.

NOTE:
Although we could draw a line graph for this data, it would not really be very sensible because we only have annual figures for three years. If we had annual data for many years, then it would be more meaningful to use a line graph with a continuous line from year to year. Nevertheless, you will understand the point being made here that the type of data presented makes no basic difference to the way you must answer the question.

THE BIG PICTURE
This same analysis can be made from any one of the data sources presented here. Although quite a lot of data is presented, in principle, it is not difficult.

1. TRENDS
Years are presented on the data so we can look for trends:

INCREASE IN PERCENTAGE OF SPENDING
electricity & water
education
entertainment

DECREASE IN PERCENTAGE OF SPENDING
housing
food

FAIRLY STABLE (in fact, it actually PEAKED)
holidays

PEAKED: DETAIL OR NOT
Note this last category is not really just stable, there is more to the story than this. In this case, the percentage of spending rose to a peak and then fell back. Is this important? Well, in general, it depends on the data in the question. Here an increase of around 35%, in relative terms, is followed by a decrease of around 27%, in relative terms, so these changes are not huge but they are not insignificant. This is a judgement that needs to be made from question to question when you see peaks, and also dips, in Task 1 Writing questions.

2. MAGNITUDES
The magnitudes can easily be mentioned in the question as part of the description of trends, perhaps with the exception of the proportion of spending on holidays and entertainment, which saw the lowest proportion of spending, and we can deal with that very simply in a single RELATIVE CLAUSE as done in this sentence.

IN BRIEF
One approach to writing the overview might be:

“Overall, the proportion of spending increased significantly on electricity & water, education and entertainment over the period while it saw a decrease for housing and food. In addition, the percentage of expenditure on holidays was relatively stable, in comparison to most other items.”

Note that it would be possible to replace this last sentence with:

“In addition, the percentage of expenditure on holidays rose to a peak and then fell back.”

this is entirely accurate and it really doesn’t take any longer to write IF you realise that this somewhat erratic behaviour has occurred.

IN SHORT
The way the data is presented really makes no difference to the way candidates must approach the question. The big picture statement above is the same no matter how the data is presented and the ‘Details” section, which would come after this would also be the same.

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